If you find yourself imitating another writer, that doesn't have to be a bad thing, especially if you are a young or a new writer. However, you should be conscious of exactly how you are imitating him - word choice, sentence structure, motifs? - and think about why you're doing it.
Of the Moon
DescriptionI think the best of the Moon Faery poems. This is the second-last
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Of the Moon
What is it?
I ask you what is it about this full moon rolling slowly
Obsession with a fantasy
Descriptionforbidden love
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In my dreams she came to me one night
mysterious she was
with her long black hair and bright blue eyes
dressed in a sexy white dress
her breats so lushish and inviting
I strangely longed to touch them
What was it about her that left me so confused
so mezmorised by her gorgeous beauty
No man could ever compare to her breath taking beauty
her curves so graceful and her lips so pink
her eye lashes so black and lushish and long
her features so small and refined
Frosty night creaky bed
DescriptionChristmas eve in a new house
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I remember the frost that Christmas Eve,
As we walked to the house,
Our first Christmas on our own,
Together in Love,all new, everything the first.
You held my hand tight,
With giddy hearts our grip warmed,
Every footstep crunched laughter in my chest,
Every breath wrote the Utopia of Love,
We had gathered up our bits and bobs ,
What we did not beg for,we borrowed, or stole,
Our bare carpet less sitting room ,just chairs,
Was the Mansion we rushed to,on our way home,
Our Life
Descriptiona few random comments about the meaning of life...y'know, nothing important or anything
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Our Life
As Lennon said when we were sat in his farmhouse kitchen
Sipping fresh milk from his undoubtedly contented cows,
